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i.
i’ve been too long on my own, darlin’
watchin’ the crows swoop down in the field
behind the barn. you laugh when i say,
‘i can’t tell what’s real’ —recreating memories
to suit myself. there’s a black fly trapped
in-between the glass and the screen. i’d like
to set it free.
ii.
there’s no way out: caught up in a whiskey
haze; caught up in a too-tight dress
and black mascara. her red lips and you’re
just a ghost and i forgot how to speak. i don’t
know where i am and you’re still too far away.
iii.
she don’t care, no. i’m fallin’.
iv.
my words, darlin’. my bones are all knotted up
and i know you won’t be there, but please hear me:
the crows won’t pluck this Auschwitz gaze,
and lust is just an empty bottle. i only ever wanted
to feel safe, to fall asleep next to you.
but my bed is empty.
i’ve been too long on my own, darlin’
watchin’ the crows swoop down in the field
behind the barn. you laugh when i say,
‘i can’t tell what’s real’ —recreating memories
to suit myself. there’s a black fly trapped
in-between the glass and the screen. i’d like
to set it free.
ii.
there’s no way out: caught up in a whiskey
haze; caught up in a too-tight dress
and black mascara. her red lips and you’re
just a ghost and i forgot how to speak. i don’t
know where i am and you’re still too far away.
iii.
she don’t care, no. i’m fallin’.
iv.
my words, darlin’. my bones are all knotted up
and i know you won’t be there, but please hear me:
the crows won’t pluck this Auschwitz gaze,
and lust is just an empty bottle. i only ever wanted
to feel safe, to fall asleep next to you.
but my bed is empty.
Literature
Something in my Mind
Something is in my mind.
So many thoughts to combine.
I’ve got to get to my desk.
I’m clicking on my pen.
Sounding like a hen.
And writing my life away!
Let’s write a poem that can tell a thousand stories!
And makes a mark in history!
I’ve got a glowing lightbulb above my head that is very bright.
I hope is doesn’t burn out.
Literature
Angstxiety
I am work weak on Wednesday
in a heap of hangover and hesitation
with fingers on a phone haptically
actively anticipating feedback—
I need that why do I need that.
My angst and anxiety
is constant and courses
and throbs with a pulse
that demands concern
of a baby boomer crooning poetic
in the distance to call me antisocial, or you know,
you could just call me.
If being this busy in an age
of constant communication
feels like having slept
but not feeling rested,
I'd rather cancel my plans
like a responsible millennial
and go to bed.
Literature
SOMETHING
What smoky poltergeist has lit out
across the dusty plains of my mind
and left no footprint?
A contrarian alchemist turning
my gold into lead and taking with it
all my illusions of clarity
Those wizards and sorcerers pushing
their false incantations and last right lies
I sense another curve in my future
Something just up ahead
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- written while listening to Ben Howard
- written while listening to Ben Howard
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Second and last stanzas are my favorites, but the whole piece is haunting.