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she carries it ‘round her neck like a crucifix;
she writes it on the scapulae of deer and human skulls.
in her pile of oracle bones, lies her faith.
and when the snow falls, her fingers become frozen in scripture;
she’s left muttering the names of her god again and again.
it matters not which words leave her mouth because god is everything

everything

until she was nothing.

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~Bifflechips Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great final lines. Already, the language is great and powerful and visual, but the last line really nails in the meaning. Love this one.
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:iconmelodysnow:
Thank you so much! <3
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:iconglossolalias:
this is perfect.
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:iconriseandbe:
*RiseandBe Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Powerful and breath-taking. The structure and language you used flow gracefully together and the topic is embraced within like it couldn't have possibly been written any other way.
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:iconmelodysnow:
Thank you so much! <3
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:iconriseandbe:
*RiseandBe Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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*0hgravity Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
powerful final lines - breaking format gave it a great emphasis.
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:iconmelodysnow:
Thank you! ^^
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